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Old 07-24-04, 01:35 PM   #7
~Lady Fiya~
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From: chi-town
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best lines were:
Seven deadly sins? Battling this bitch is easier then eating mandarins//
Cause you’re hardly an obstacle, like you’re a Popsicle high on gin//
It’s too bad my knuckles are bloody, so I’d choke you with a wristband//
And I’ll rip you up like I’m ripping up genetic DNA strands//

Structure: Will
Flow: 8th
Vocab: Will
Punches: 8th <came hard as hell

best closer: 8th> Long story short, I’ll have this bitch dig his own grave//
And prove to him I use garbage as a noun before having him molested in a rave//

ha haa lol nice battle you two, but i gotta give the vote to 8th Wonder, nigga you took this shit.. aight check my links in my sig ~LK diss~ aight

~wun~
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