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Old 07-24-04, 01:59 PM   #10
~Lady Fiya~
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SPIn; aight structure and flow was easy but too simple, u do need to enhance ya punches being serious!

Hattrick: u came harder, nice flow overall.. structure was aight too.. You had good personal when u mentioned her need to work on his punches..

My Vote/ Hattrick

y'all stay up aight
~wun~
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