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Old 07-24-04, 02:24 PM   #14
KroNuz
 
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Kool Col-B - Ummm First Line.... Bad... Didnt Have Any Hard Punches Throughout Verse.... You Wanna Focus On Dissing Him, Makeing Him Look Bad And That Winz Punches, Flow Wasnt Good Niether, First 2 Linez Didnt Rhyme At All.... Structure Was Ok If You Made Harder Punches And Changed Your Self Glorification To A Witty Diss... Just Some Tips To Help Ya Out... Anyway Overal Not To Good....

Golden Shellz- Pretty Much Getz Every Aspect...Punches Were There, Flow Was Decent And Structure Was Ok..... Overal Decent Verse

Punches- Golden Shellz
Flow- Golden Shellz
Metaz- Niether
Multis- Niether
Structure Golden Shellz
Originality- Golden Shellz
Personals- Niether

Final Vote------ Golden Shellz


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