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Old 07-24-04, 03:25 PM   #8
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From: Chapter 4
IP:

Daillest best bar:
“Scorchin… scratches ta holes with blood pourin…
Decapitate, Gut-lacerate, n donate this fagots organs…”
Was Feelin this one …

J Trooper’s best bar:
“Im Twisted, Dimented bring the most SIckest Illusiv Dimensions into Spittin
they'll be searchin for ya cranium,fingers, torso like Mtv road rule's Missions”
lol … hotness

Both verse were decent. I know both of you could of came a lot harder ..
J Troopers punches seemed a little bit harder and more dircect.
Also a good use of Multi’s

DaIllest yours was ok. Wasn’t feeling some of yo shit like:
Bleep Ble-Bleep, that’s all folks… like I was porkin…(porky the pig)
Yea… Tha manz is morbid, cut yo fuckin body parts in proportions…

^The first line was whack as hell,and the second one didn’t make sense

Overall: J trooper took this battle (in my opinion) Keep it up.