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Old 07-24-04, 04:03 PM   #22
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deli:

had great wordplay but thats about it. nothing else was rele stickin out, not much to say b/c you need to hit more punches, get some structure and find some personals. you had one.

truth:

had good punches, decent stucture, good flow and some worplay, nice creativity, need to work on the vocab.. but you won.

vote: truth

return the favor.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137008
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