Close battle../

Lyrical Onslaught

This newbie accepted my challenge he knew he’d receive a loss.
My spits’ are “dangerously hot”, It’s like fucking Tabasco sauce.
(played...self-glor. = no)

Says he is a “manipulator”, be he can’t even manipulate his mind.
Can’t “light his mind”, even if he had the brain of Albert Einstein.
(not bad punch)

Fuck blowing this emcees fucking mind, its already brain farted.
I'll own this fucking cat, just like buying a pet in the supermarket.
(Decent, a little played)

I drop bombs, like if Japans city, Hiroshima was under attack again.
My rhymes are atomic, because it describes your wacky talent.
(not bad)

My lines are murderous, I’ll be the cause of this textcees downfall.
I mean this guy is pleading for battles, and yet he’ll be losing all.
(Not bad)

I’ll “son” this guy harder than his dad sonned you as a small boy.
Bringing him?, Hell nah, I’ll lure this kid to “hell” with a dick decoy.
(Not bad, second line was blah though)

Once I punch you, On the other hand, He can’t ever take a stand.
Might as well watch Peter Pan, cause your punches Never-Land.
(Decent closer...straight wordplay)

Manipulation

why this guy sweating me about posting my verse first?..
dawg u posted the rules..u retarded?...amnesia your curse?..
(not bad)

i see u reppin where you from..coz u talk like you from "down south"..
i know you slow..but thats your arse..dnt use it as your mouth!..
(okay)

why you coming on here?..so u can "drop"?..unlike your balls...
"13" years old..you couldnt fuck wit me..even after puberty falls..
(decent wordplay)

i seen your rhymes before..like,...in every one elses threads!..
most your punches been seen..way before biggie woz dead!..
(blah)

tell u what BOY..your "sonned"..so you can call me your mother..
im about to make your style be "street"..by leaving u in the gutter!..
(okay)

ima leave you clearly filed..easy to find..put u under lost n found..
ive seen more shit in your verse,than dropped in the dog-pound!..
(blah again)

think you made a big mistake..forgot to mention..i was a GIRL...
so your verse carrys less "weight"..than a fake diamonds n pearls!..
(seemed forced to rhyme)

V/LyricalOnslaught - more consistant punches, both were alright though.

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