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Old 07-24-04, 07:20 PM   #22
~Luciano~
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like justify said this battle sucked but ibraheem had somewhat bad structure your meta's were not there but ya punches got the job done.chop down your structure some it kind of looks stretched out . you didnt have any personals you need 2 work on that and word play
6/10
Metaphor your strucs were fucked up 2 but you had some alright punches you can do better than that tho, and you had some personals

my vote- Ibraheem jus cuz ya punches were a lil higher
both of ya need 2 elevate cuz that shit was horrible
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