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Old 07-24-04, 09:47 PM   #10
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Ruffridah187

Droppin incredible blows that shred-your-bull shit flows
So ferocious that they wreck your atrocious rhymes that you call dope
Your rhymes dirty, wasn't you learning when mama told you to wash with soap?
->>decent opener

I don't think so, you know that when i drop you don't want any mo'
My rhymes make you have bad times and bring yo' shit down to da flo'
->>weak

My rhymes so confusing to solve them you'd have to be Indiana Joans
Your rhymes tiny and mine are shiney as if they was chrome
->>played chrome line

I control you and tell you what to do like you was my ho
You aint my friend or associate, i'll tell you again you are my fo
You couldn't beat me even if you was Bone singin Take Me Home
->>not a very good closer


AutoMATIK™

Matik's Style So-Sick i'll 'Slap ya mouth' till i can 'Throw-Spits',Brutaly Bash 'Beers to ya Visions' an tell ya to 'Stay Focused',My 'Charged For demestic Violence' for 'Killin a GOATs-SIN'//1
->>what does killin a goats sin mean?

Imma 'Elevate ya Job' as the only 'Way you'll Work-Up',Connect ya 'Jaw to ya sholders' an -Hunched', cleave ya 'Wordsuz i'll 'Kill u in action' like 'Obserd-Stunts!'//2
->>decent

...Ok Lets go now...

Sad'll 'Slit ya Throat' an 'Stay afew more seconds' just to 'Take-Ya-Soul',You getting 'Fucked By Dafeet' like i 'Rape-With-Toe's',i'de give Ruff 'Fist shaped Pladoe' and he couldn't find 'Hit To Make-A-Mold'//3
->>first part was cool but the second half fell off

Putta 'Steak through ya heart' to put ya 'Heart-in-Beef',Then give it 'Two To Three Shots' ta watch 'Wack Start-To-Leak!!!', an my 'Fist like Burnin Lighters' the way i'll 'Scar-Wit-Heat!!'//4
->>pretty cool

punch Scar ya Cheek,no Hard Technieques Thats why you 'Soft' when i Attack wit 'Broken-Heart-Wounds',you 'Thought u had a master peice' but i made a 'Smoke-Of-Art-Fumes!'//5
->>decent


Automatik took this...even though it was stretched as fuck there was still something hot in each line. Im not really a fan of the stretched-to-hell style youre probably better off without it.

Ruffridah your verse was decent but it didnt really come with anything new. Ive heard all that shit before. It was an ok verse though.

v/Automatik
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