i heard that shit and the beat is good but you just didn't do nothin' wit it. It sounded like you was just readin' not rappin'. Be more enthusiastic when you rappin'. But i wouldn't play that in the hood honestly. But if you added doubles and other shit then you'll probably would get played n tha hood. Maybe.... other words it was aight

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