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Old 07-24-04, 10:35 PM   #7
KroNuz
 
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D- Julian...-- Better Than Your Last I Voted n In My Eyes.... Though Your Structure Needs Work, Try To Even Thingz Out And Say What You Gotta But End It In A Diss Or a Punch That Makes im Look Bad.. And You Should Work On Formatting Your Bars For Structure... Flow Was Ok... But Overal Better Than Last Verse But Not Enough To Top Trooper..

Trooper-- Ok Verse... Thong Line Was Good.. Punches Were There, Flow Was Ok.. Structure Is Alright... Overal Ok Verse, Better Than Juliens.. Punches Got Ya My Vote...

Vote---- Trooper...

Return Favor And Vote Fairly On My Battle....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137169
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