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alright this was an okay topical not bad at all
Im givin this one to flah though.....
Imagery- I felt that flash took the imagery slightly more becuase his verse was more heart felt and eveything and it had a good story line going with it
emotion- Again i felt that flash took the emotion becuase it was just a really good verse and some parts where intense and others where depressing so he deffintly took the emotion
vocab- Flash takes this aswell because his vocab was more complex and anyone that cant see that needs to get glasses and get a brain... His words was more complex they was bigger and jus a better use of vocab
complexity- This also goes to flash due to the fact that his vocab was complex along with his whole verse i really felt that this verse was a great piece
Flow[b] Im saying this is a tie jus becuase flash cant get every catagory.. but seriously both had good flow
[b]Structure- Its obvious that flash takes this becuase his lines was more even and just more put together
flash takes this cuase he took virtually every catagory and his verse was more put together and alot of thought went into it it seems
with akwordz it seems that he just did a search on google or something and copy and pasted it... not really good emotion or shit in it in my opnion
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