dawg you had some good punches and you came pretty hard but it was pretty basics but the line i liked was
"My 'punches' will leave you outta air like a couple of
flat tires..."

but

then i read 7*0*8*'s verses and they had me weak his shit totaly reversed your rap and used it against you and he had alot of creativity my favorite line was
"oprah punches neva work don't you see
why u gettin on her? u sopposed 2 be dissin me"
the only thing about yours i didnt like is that you had spelling errors

v/ 7*0*8*

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