don...i was really feeling your verse at first but your flow fell off and so did your structure some lines were long some were short...and you fell off topic a couple times and added lines that didnt need to be there...your vocab was bad it was too basic...you had some good wordplay and a couple good multies but other than that i think you did a poor job at writing this topical

legacy: your verse wasnt much better than don's but your vocablary won this battle for you...everything else between your verses was pretty much even but the vocabulary defined the winner...decent imagery decent flow structure looked stretched/forced you could have came hotter and put more effort into this but i still think you won

vote: legacy

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