View Single Post
Old 07-25-04, 01:26 PM   #13
KroNuz
 
Posts: 1,489
From: New York
IP:

lol... ok...

Killa- Your First Verse Was Better Than The Other 3 In The Whole Battle.... Stick To Your First Style It Works My Effectivly. Punches Were Eh, You Had Some Wordplay, Some Metaz... Stucture In Your Second Verse Was Good.. N You Dont Need To "Highlight" Or [b]Bold[/i] Your Punches And Wordplay, Doesnt Make It Better Jus Harder To Read... Anyway Overal Ok First Verse... Second Verse Sucked

Da Vinchi- Needa Up Ya Game.. And Elavate... Structure Was Bad And Punches Didnt Hit... Flow Was Eh.. Could Use Some Work There Too..... Try To Fucos On Makeing Harder Punches In Your Next Battle... Overal Not To Good On Either Verse....

V-'- Killa Skillz.. Overal Better Verses Than Da Vinchi...

Return Favor With Honest Vote'....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137169
__________________
Send a message via AIM to KroNuz