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Old 07-25-04, 01:30 PM   #28
T West
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If His Tag Team Partner Voted..Still Wouldnt Pull Strings...
Guess That Makes 2 Ways He Suck And Stuck On Kingz .
^no...
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NickName Monoply That Way He Hop On Off Boards....
Bein His Mommas Baby .The Only Time He Gets A-Ward...
^decent
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Zero Minded..Spul Aim Icon Blinded..Leavin You Breatheless...
Lyrical Taughtless....Bein Thoughtless The Only Time U Reckless..
^not feelin' it...

The Day You Beat Me Is When Mugsy Bouges Get A Dunk Basket....
Long Review Of Banks..You Can be Orlando And Not Work Magic...
^no...

Icon Actually Looks Like You..He's Fake Like Walmart Spinners...
Your UntNoticed..I See Im In The Match But Where My Contender??
^no...
...
Post In Purple..Punches Scretch Hurdle..Lyrics Is Laughable....
Should Work Security..Since He guards State Capitol....
^atleast a personal...hard-hittin'?..no


Dawg, at makin' mistakes... your verse is so prolifick (a growth or shit like that)
Yo name is misspelled too. I mean, what's a Polifick?
^looked like u were headin' sumwhere...then the 2nd line...i dunno?...worded horribly...and not hard-hittin'

My verse is always fire, jus lookin' at it, has you BBQed
You're battlin' a vet. The only time you beat one, was by DQ
^first line was gay and totally destroyed any chance of this becomin' a decent punch

You kno you're an ugly fuck, so you posted yo pic so petite
Like yo title, you always fade away backwards, facin' the elite
^decent...atleast it's a personal

My verse will have you sick... greener than tree moss
At the end you'll prolly bitch again, to RB, about yo loss
^first line was gay....ruined the whole thing

You're tryin' to steal away my award, by takin' "Best vet of July"
But after I clearly merk yo ass, we'll all kno that the Awardz are a lie
^doesn't seem like ur merkin' him so far...

Jus lookin' at the predictions, is enough to wipe away yo smile
I mean, yo punches make less sense, than yo stupid title "etile" (Elite fadin' back)
^horrible...wtf were u thinkin' when u typed that 2nd line?

Overall: Spul did have the personals but did not use them effectively...his verse was worded horribly to have hard-hittin' punches...Polifick didn't do much better either...but overall...his verse maintained a steady level of "no's"...Spul on the other hand had some..."Decent"...but mostly horrible lines...weak metaphors ruin lines.

v/- Polifick
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