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Old 07-25-04, 01:41 PM   #23
Wicked One
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Timeless- you verse was nice....i enjoyed it n shit....but yo punches didnt seem to hit hard enough .....ya gotta work on yo punches....you had a good structure....and you had a decent flow...but not tha greastest....but you had no personals but you need some personals yo...umm but i didnt like the R.Kelly line ...that shit is just played out yo...but overall you did well.....
J Trooper- your verse was nice also ....but yo punches i thought were better then his...and they hit much harder too....you had a good flow i thought....you didnt really have much personals...but your structure sucked ......but overall you get my vote for better punches cuz they were better than Timeless's and they hit much harder...

v/J Trooper....
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