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Old 07-25-04, 10:38 PM   #6
The Black Plague
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Da illest took this, jus cuz cal was wack as fuck...

Cal- Bad verse, struc was horrible, you dint flow at all... You need to stop rhymin bout bein a thug, cuz u aint one... Work on punches, those were missin, and try to come wit harder personlals... Elevate man.

Ill- Not a bad verse, but far from good. You had better punches than him, but ya didn't realy have any nice personals work on that. And ya struc was kinda off, u had like 3 lines, but only 2 were ya punchline. You need to come harder, but u came enuff this time to beat him.
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