that was sick, nice way getting ya point across ya thought well put down the creativeness u had made the story alot better to read the whole lay-out the real life thought u put down was like WOW u had made time to really think about this one huh?? but i loved this one alot nicely done....

9.5 outta 10

keep droping them....

are u a poet or just a rhymer who just thought of this idea and had a real impact on thoughts that u wrote...