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Old 07-25-04, 10:53 PM   #5
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plague=ya shit was good......you had some ok punches up in there.een though ya structre was stretched......so it didnt flow very well but good job

Schema= ya verse was good too........it was repetitive though.........i thought that your punches were betta then plagues.....and ya structure wasnt as stretched so you get the vote here
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