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Old 07-26-04, 09:48 AM   #27
GangsStarShit
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Manipulation got this...more on point with the verse...hit harder...punches were ok sum lines played however i thought that they were better than ibs best lines (which there werent)...ibraheem u went off topic here dawg...this is a battle not a self-glory verse they have cyphers for that...also u both need sum elevation because the rhymes were basic flow was nice and struct not too bad but complexity is needed in both verses as i never felt this was a classic...

v/manipulation...rtf on ma sig i h8 sleepin
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