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Old 07-26-04, 09:58 AM   #13
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OK.......

THUG..structure/flow woz ok...but simple......elevate that coz it catches the eye..
first impressions n all.....
punches were fairly weak and played..micheal jackson n shit.come up wit sum new shit......
basically it woz a newb verse.not bad.but def elevation needed

GANGSTAR-nice structure..it set the punches up well..
i liked your wordplay,sum original punches and concepts.......
overall your verse woz of a higher standard in every area....
micheal jackson is played now though...everyones using it...ive used it twice lol!

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