DIM:
You A Hella Combiniation! Meta 3's , Wit Soft Jabs And A Glass Jaw!
This Match Bout As Fair As A Stick Of Butter Against A Hack Saw!
^didnt understand the meta 3 part,but the second line was decent

You Got No Leverage! This Battle Gonna Leave You Wit Servered Fists!
Ya Battlin The Cleverest! Like Regurderated Food You Were Never Shit!
^first line a filler,second line Nice

I Enact Wit Tactics Where This Half Wit Lacked It Wit His Wack Scripts!
Ya Antics Bout To Have Ya Ass Split Worse Than Colonary Mal Practice!
^nice rhyme scheme second line once again the stronger hitting one.

You Couldn't Have Lines That Stood Out Rockin Correctional Clothes!
Sessions Froze! No Way You Comin Wit Progressive Progression Blows!
^no

Cause You Could Drop A Nickle In Fieces And Still Not Coin Shit!
Imma Leave Ya Grill Fuck'd Up Like A Blind Orthadontist Appointment!
^nicest bar in the battle .. both lines were good..

META:

Flip a script, along with your name rye..
MiD tells the truth,
Cause he cant spit halfway decent lies..
^last line not understanding,saying mid tells the truth cuz he cant spit halfway decent lies means he's telling the truth in all his personals??? dunno...im not feeling the set up of the line but it rhymes so no complaint there.

Cant believe ya rock soundclick music..
Gave DiM a punch,
But he jabbed it out, then didnt use it..
^nahhh that didnt really hit anything here...music and use it rhymed but the punch wasnt hittin.

DiM, you suck, your losing this battle..
Would say DiM has dark dopeness,
But I realized he was in my shadow..
^nice second n third line that makes sense.

Your last battle was good, I liked it..
That was until you got a ghost,
And the verse you had them write it..
^words could have been worded better so you didnt have "It" at the end of the two lines i hate when that happens. and the rhyme was harder to follow sense the second line was long like the first and the third one. but it makes sense...kid got ghost writers.

Its no secret, your wack man give up..
He said I like gay jokes,
Well your line isnt straight, you suck..
^witty line. one of those compliclated to understand or like if your stupid kind of punches but its easy simple str8 to the point and a decent punch ...the rhyme scheme of these three lines matched up kind of nice..


all in all ....Dim got my vote on the acount of having Multies/punches/structure/vocab

Meta didnt get my vote because i wasnt feeling the structure..multies would have made the rhyme scheme better..the punches werent really evident to me they were too simple,but you did have personals on your opponent but not enough good ones .or for that matter not any good personals to attack him to win.