matik took this easily..better punches...better structure...better flow...better personals...better vocab...better everything....this was an iight verse from u..not ur best but enuff to smoke him..good punches
guns: u need to up your game pimpin,...u gettin there though....ur verse was aiight nothing special....but pretty sick....ok punches..ok personals...bad vocab
vote: matik
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