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Old 07-26-04, 03:17 PM   #9
The Black Plague
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Haha, myster e u fuckin herb, complicated punches are good, and thats why revoke gets my vote... Skittles u had some decent punches, some were wayyyy played tho, like your opener, way wack... Also your struc was off, and i dint get teh whole( ) around your punches, kinda took away from your flow... Not a bad verse from you tho, jus elevated... Revoke you had a good verse, better punches and some nice personals in there, callin him vanilla ice lol.. You had good struc and good flow, and because of better punches and flow, u get my vote...
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