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Old 07-26-04, 05:05 PM   #18
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i pop off again this is tech 05//
i'll off ya lines//
make ya web status "offline"//

whats the matter tech in ya throat//
its like your under 18 cause you won't get no vote//

those was ya best 2 lines and it was a decent punch nice try at trying to hit him hard but if ya whole verse or a few more bars was like that u would of most def won this,


You'll take 5 for ya team, somethin you prepared to do/
Marlboro Bullets, get addicted then inhale a few/

Yopu can come on and battle, but thats somethin lost/
While I shatter your dome like a pumpkin toss/

these was 4blood best lines i like what u tryed to do in the 2ed line in the first bar that hit preety good to me,
and again the 2ed line in the 2ed bar was preety good i thought and more of a direct hit...

flow: tie
punches: 4blood
creativeness: 4blood

vote: 4 blood

^^^ get it vote for-blood's but fuck'em C's UP....