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The Black Plague
structure is pretty good...flow is pretty good...u had some good metas...wordplay was alright...some of ur punches connected...decent personals...
schema
structure is also pretty good...flow was pretty consistent...ur metas werent that good...u attempted wordplay, but some it didnt go to well....a few, at best, of ur punches connected...the whole played/15 hundreds shit is also played...no good personals...
Overall
both had a good structure...both had a good flow...The Black Plague had more, and better metsa...better wordpaly....more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...The Black Plague gets my vote...
VOTE - THE BLACK PLAGUE
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