2HarD2LoSe
structure was pretty good...flow was pretty consistent...no multis, as half of ur lines didnt even rhyme...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

GangsStarshit
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure was pretty good...flow was on lock...no multis...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a pretty good structure...both had a consistent flow...neither had multis...neither had good personals...GangsStarshit had better wordplay and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...GangsStarshit had the better overall verse, so he gets my vote...

VOTE - GANGSSTARSHIT