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Old 07-26-04, 06:13 PM   #12
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M.C. Skitlz

my style is like pushin Alt F4 it'll {shut you down}
its similar to a switchblade in a volkswagen beatle cuz i'll {cut a clown}
good start

dont try to shit on me you aint potty {trained}
the only way your spit could be dirty is if you threw up and your shirt got {stained}
1st line ok 2ed weak,

so im sittin here wonderin why you {asked for me}
its almost as if you were lookin for a {catastrophy}
thats good,

you couldnt battle me if you were backed by the confederate {cavalary}
my flows hurt my own jaw so bad i swear i got a {cavity}
decent,

instead of battlin me you shoulda kept it {real}
and checked in the bargain bin cuz its the only way you'll get a {deal}
haha decent ending...

Revoke

A ghost writer is the only way your droppin hot when you face
cuz the threat of u droppin means no more than Michael Jackson’s baby
ok start

You cant even do text how the hell are you gonna get on radio playlists
this so called Mc, to make u famous u would let a label rape ya ANUS
2ed line weak set up was decent...

Vanilla Ice is back people please stand up and show your respect
only problem is hes a overall fruit(skittles)and Male of F? still suspect
ummm?

EmBrace This, I'll do you basic an...........all but off your Jaw
Your not an emcee just a common fraud…u can’t see me like Dr. Claw
not feeling this

to keep your self esteem up this kid prolly tells himself hes great
hope you dont believe in Destiny cuz you losing is going down as fate
decent enough ending,


but my vote is for: M.C. Skitlz
just a better verse and more creative and harder hitting....