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Old 07-26-04, 06:21 PM   #9
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Ok k k nice drop from the both of u i like votein on battlez like this cuz i have 2 break down every single line 2 decides who win but hands down the hottest bar in the whole battle was "u still struggle, gainin stress, you describe garbage like adjectives//
I make money, and lose this weight like women with miscarraiges//"

that bar jus about won it 4 will he had nice structure nice vocab nice meta's but you lacked in the personals kid you need 2 up that but otha than that perfect drop

"Trying to lose my weight? I’ll leave you meditating on a baby carriage//
Break this bitch’s neck, and have his so called “money making scheme” fucked up like Britney Spears marriage//" 8th that was ya hottest bar also good wordplay somewhat good complexity you could of elevated on that and ya struc was a lil off which if you had that on point you could of took this one

My Vote= Wil ~~~~~~Good Drop Fella'z~~~~~~~
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