Tolerant Level
structure is good...flow is good for the most part...u had some multis...wack wordplay...none of ur punches connected...all the ones u had were played and/or wack...no good personals...

4Blood2Hound0
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure is ok...flow was pretty good...no multis...wack wordplay...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Tolerant Level had the better structure...both had a good flow...neither had multis...neither had good wordplay...neither had good personals...4Blood2Hound0 had more connecting punches...so basing off of that...punches r more important that a good structure...so 4Blood2Hound0 gets my vote...

VOTE - 4BLOOD2HOUND0

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against tech05...thanx...