joel reckless
dont put /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure is mad wack...write ur lines down the page, not in paragraphs...flow fell off, cause ur structure was so wack...no multis...no wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

7*0*8*
structure is pretty good...flow is pretty good...no multis...wordplay was shit...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had multis...neither had good wordplay...neither had good personals...7*0*8* had the better structure...the better flow...he also had more connecting punches...so basing off of that...7*0*8* had the better overall verse, so he gets my vote...

VOTE - 7*0*8*

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against tech05...thanx...