THATS REAL
MAN I READ THAT AND WAS JUST LIKE DAMN THIS DUDES GOT POTENTIAL IF YOU MADE YOUR CHORUS LONGER YOU CAN GO A LONG WAY. I REALY LIKED THE DETAILS YOU USED IT MADE ME SEE THINGS THROUGH THE CHARACTERS EYES. THAT WAS REAL KEEP THAT COMIN.

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THE TRUTH IS I'M BETTER THAN YOU