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Flash: 7/10
Nice Story Line....Kinda Played Most People Take This Direction With Topicals. Your Emotion Was Pretty Nice..Not Too Much Vocab But Word Usuage Was Aight. Not Many Metaphors or Multis But Your Structure and Flow Was Nice.

Awkordz: 5/10
Would've Been Better If You Woulda Took A Direction With Your Topical Instead of It Seeing That You Wrote Line After Line Just Defining The Word. Um...Your Flow Was Good...Just Your Emotion and Creativity Needs Improvement.

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