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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP:
all i gotta say iz "Cause in real life he has less friends then NBC's next season"
that line righ there is wha got Durmil my vote hands down good drop cuz
sik you had perfect structure but ya punches were plain and simple you need 2 elevate alot and use more personals because thats wha wins you battles, work on elevating
Durmil you had nice wordplay and complexity not the best structure but hey it got the job done i like the punches you were throwin they hit the mark and got the job done
good battle
but my vote goes 2~~~~~~~~Durmil~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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