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Old 07-26-04, 10:48 PM   #20
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vote caliph for actually rhymin

half of other dudes verse iddnt evne rhyme that spell the shit down the v erese is played out kid an ya bars are weak honestly step ya game up

caliph ya shit needs to elevate to stop puttin so many//// in ya verses it makes the structure all fucked up lookin

both elevate ALOT an work on better punchs

vote caliph for not using played shit an a tiny bit better verse