Alright, Ghost, you need to work on your game on vocab...and, everything.
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dis dude stay online for like 3DAYS STRAIGHT...
bags under his eyes..in socks and sweats talking bout “EBAY’S GREAT”(LMAO)
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That could have been a sick rhyme, but you fucked it up. You're best line was this:
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now i'm postin J Troop on milk cartonz like vitamin D...
you like Tysons trainer you just warm-up the Mic for me realisticly
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Work on more like that.
J_Trooper, nice. Wordplay was awesome, vocab was like that of a muse, I was feeling it. Best line to me:
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Rb's Most.. Deadlist... Possession... Equipped with Lyrical Def Defying Pedigrees
Im Biligerant with a 7th Sense im usein u by lettin off my seeds on ya Baby Seat
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I felt some lines were a tad confusing and too lengthy with vocab, but better more than none.
Don't know what caliph is smoking, but vote J_Trooper.