schema, i wasnt really feelin your flow, when i read your verse it didnt come together to well, you had decent punches but they dont mean nothin when they cant come together, your structure was pretty good

bp, you didnt seem like you put alot of effort into what you wrote, but thats just me. i liked the way your shit came together, you had some ok punches and good structure, you were also pretty consistent through out the whole verse

so my vote goes to Black Plague

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