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Old 07-27-04, 01:00 AM   #13
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At first I wasnt gettin ya flow, then I caught on/
A lot of nice punches and wordplay there man/
Multis could have been a little better, but still good/
But you had me confused til I got use to ya rhyme scheme/
break ya lines up more, it looks like a giant rhymin paragraph/
Good shit in it, juss a little hard to read thas all man/
Keep spittin man and keep elevatin I give it a 7.5/10 man/
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