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Old 07-27-04, 01:25 AM   #6
D.A.
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A very intracate piece man, I liked it somewhat/
It started off pretty bad but got better/
That memory card shit was corny man/
You had a really nice flow that made you feel the piece though/
Could have had better words and wordplay, but it was good enough/
I would like to see some multis in there to add to your flow on it/
Use more intracate, diverse words than simple words/
But the piece was very nice, and a good theme man/
Keep spittin and keep elevating, I give it a 6/10 man/
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