Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Was a pretty good battle...Pro the only thing that I wasnt really feelin was a few of your rhymes were kinda streched, you coulda made em rhyme a lil better. The flow was decent once i got the hang of it, i had to read it a couple time to feel where you were comin from...but it was tight. Some nice punches, multies were here and their kinda hit and miss, which took away from your flow. The metas were decent but I just thought you coulda worked on more of them.
Datruth29 I think this was the best verse ive seen from you yet. The flow was very good, could be flowed slow or fast and switched up easy...I was feelin it. The Metas were nice, I liked the bridge one, and kind midas very nice. Punches coulda been better I thought, and no personaly either. Vocab was nice and was really making sense, I notice a lot of people use scholar words and dont make sense...so that was a bonus. Just the overall structure and additives in your verse made it sound much harder than his, which gave you the clear edge.
Good battle though...no beef...BIG UPS
v/Datruth29
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