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Old 07-27-04, 02:33 AM   #7
Magic5
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Verbal Abuse
structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...wordplay is decent...some of ur punches connected...personals were pretty good...

KroNuz
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...ur structure wasnt good...ur liens were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchness...u had tight multis...wordplay was pretty good...a few of ur punches connected...personals didnt connect....

Overall
KroNuz had more, and better multis...as well as better wordplay...Verbal Abuse had the better structure...the more stable flow....more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...Verbal Abuse gets my vote...

VOTE - VERBAL ABUSE

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx...