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Old 07-27-04, 02:38 AM   #16
Magic5
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Da Vinchi
structure isnt very consistent...flow fell off due to the lack of consistency...no multis...wordplay was simple, and wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

killa skillz
dont put the ""s around ur words, or /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure isnt good...ur lines were mad stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchnes...multis were tight...wordplay was tight...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had a good structure...neither had a good flow...neither had good personals...killa skillz had more, and better multis...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...killa skillz gets my vote...

VOTE - KILLA SKILLZ

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the second link in my sig, against ruff_tuff_thug...thanx...