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Old 07-27-04, 02:54 AM   #9
Magic5
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Justify
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...alright personals...

Katastrofe
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...wordplay is tight...a few of ur punches connected...personals were ok...

Overall
Katastrofe had the better wordplay...both had a good structure...both had a good flow...both had ok personals...Justify had more multis...as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Justify gets my vote...

VOTE - JUSTIFY

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the second link in my sig against ruff_tuff_thug...thanx...