yo.i dnt wanna beef wit u x.
i wasnt hatin im jus pointin out that ur verse DIDNT rhyme
n the reason i keep sayin that is coz its TRUE!
its your structure thats at fault...ur lines rhyme internally.....
but raw killa rhymed the same way
n all the voters sed it didnt rhyme..it aint jus me.

LOOK DIS IS WOT I MEAN..
many come and many go,u got only 12 posts,boo u still in time to quit and let go,

SHOULD BE

u only got 12 posts, many come and many go
boo u still in time to quit....and let go

UR lines need to b a similar length,n each line needs to end wit the rhymin word/words


now im not tryin ta b funny,jus tryin ta help......thats wot peeps wanna see.
so take the advice or dnt...

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