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Old 07-27-04, 09:42 AM   #17
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Check Dis..

Mad Dog: 6/10
Your Structure Seems Off To Me..Not Really A Nice Flow but You Had Sum Nice Personals Laced Within Your Punhces. You Had 2 Fillers But The Other Punches Were Nice.. Overall Nice Drop.

Lethal Lunatic:4/10
If You Woulda Added More Personals With Creativity You Woulda Took This. Your Structure and Flow Was Decent. Just Add More Creativity and Personals With Your Punches.

Vote - Mad Dog

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