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Old 07-27-04, 10:53 AM   #14
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/\ NOPE NOPE NOPE Revoke got this...he had a better structure than Skittles and his verse was comical and WAS in my eyes funny because to me comedy in a battles is probably jus as important as rhyming. Nice wordplay and good rhyming in this battle dawg keep it up.

Skitlz this whole {} thing you dont have to use, it was a nice attempt at creativity but it made ur verse look tacky and in my opinion a lil offensive because u made it look like we couldn't spot the rhyme...which i can although ur technique would work for ENERGY lol (coz he couldn't spot a rhyme at 10 past nine) lol

V/Revoke a more comical verse and also was harder w/the punches
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