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Old 07-27-04, 12:59 PM   #8
KroNuz
 
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Break Down I

King Lucif- Your Structure Was Horrible, It Flowed Ok, Punches Werent To Good, And You Said Hoe And Fuck More Than Punches You Had In Your Verse... Anyway... Wordplay Metaz Niether.... Overal Ok



Manipulation- Structure Was Good, Punches Were Ok, They Connected And Actually Had A Meaning To Them.. Had A Personal Or To.. Overal Decent Verse...


Break Down II
Punches- Tie
Personals- Manip
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Niether
Multis- Niether
Metaphors- Niether
Structure- Manip
Originality- Manip
Vocab- Tie

Final Vote- Manioulation

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726
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