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they say you get what you look up to...for you it's the heaven...
.................i aint even good at dice and craps, but i'm rollin on 7

Not really a thrown punch at ur opponent...wasnt feeling the concept either..weak 3/10

you from the u.p. kid, don't ever try to fuck with the dirty Italy...
................and when he says "you can't see me"...take it literally

Ok..i didnt like that at all..again weak..wasnt feeling that 3/10

i'll even give you two the same words, you still couldn't rhyme it...
................cause your lines are left-out, sort of like this alignment

Actually i was feeling the punch a bit..was creative set up was kinda weak though..ok 5.5/10

you far from the hood, more like the trunk, strapped and seated...
.................cause your pun died along time ago...right after he did

i was feeling the concept also again..punch could ov been thrown better..ok again 5.5.10

yeah, everyone thinkin gio the big underdog at this wack fight?!...
........but cause of me, this thread have more feedback than ya mic

again this was ok..best punchline of the whole verse aswell..ok personal 6/10

This was an ok verse nothing really outstanding but ok..punches got better as the verse went on..seen some good potential in some bars..flow and structure were aight..

since when did noobs know who got skillz
nobody PAY attentin too you, you just like BILLZ

Wack..course ppl pay attention to bills..other wise we all be homeless 1/10

he said in bitch slapped dat i talk, 2 much shit
if skillz was money homie, then you sure u aint rich

Basic as fuck..up the creativty..2/10

u act like u the noob superhero, savin noobs from me
noobman is what they'd call ya, but u still just a noob 2 me

How many times u gonna use the word noob..weak 2/10

20-minus 20 equals you, dats an equation (20-20=0)
watch dis nigga feed of my verse like birds re-gurgitatin

wheres the rhyme scheme gone mmm...2/10

giovoni from italy and still aint got no spice in his verse
if i have 2 i'd battle him twice 2 make him work

LAUGHS wtf was that..seriously need to elevate

any ways..elevation is needed ..there was no witty/creative punches or personls in thsi verse..flow went off at the end..

v/ Giovanni..y'all drop a vote on my battle..link under my sig..no hate pz