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Old 07-27-04, 01:37 PM   #13
Magic5
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Da Prodigy
structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...wack wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

4Blood2Hound0
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish....structure is ok...flow fell off due to a lack of consistency in the structure...no multis...simple wordplay...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Da Prodigy had the better structure...and the more stable flow...neither had multis...niether had good personals...4Blood2Hound0 more, and better wordplay...as well as more connecting punches...and punches and wordplay are more important then structure and flow, so basing off of that...4Blood2Hound0 gets my vote...

VOTE - 4BLOOD2HOUND0

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx...