Very very nice piece I liked the intro and the theme of this song/
This song look like there was anngher and fire in it/
Juss kept buildin up, good scheme though/
Good imagery and words ,man/
Next time use some multis will help out the flow a little bit/
and the endind was kinda dull, i think you shoulda posted a couple more bars/
Cause when you read it, you can feel sumthin risin, then when you get to the end/
It juss goes bye bye, but still a good piece man 8.5/ 10/
keep elevatin yourself/